In today's lesson i received some class feedback on my music video, such as 'the narrative develops really nicely and it looks great, the only thing i'd say is that if you have any more appropriate footage of Lawrence to put in at the start as he's walking over the bridge then that may make a better impact when he's introduced.' and 'I really like the animations and the writing. i feel like there's a time you wrote 'reproduced' but it was in a different font to the writing at the very beginning i think.'
This was helpful to see that the narrative could be understood by audiences and that i should add more animations as the audience like them.
